Forza Motorsport Xbox 360 game advert college project - self made

[btcckid]

Here is my attempt at making a 30 second advert for college. This was made to advertise Forza Motorsport. Please watch everyone..... feedback always appreciated as i need plenty to write up about. thanks all.
just in case some of you never saw it on the videos section....
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[freejrs]

Great EPIC VOICEOVER at the end!!!

Would be great to see you at least do a burnout off your drive though!!! :-D

[transam1998]

Not bad at all

[btcckid]

thanks guys :)